Holly's Art, Doodles, and Other Stuff

Random Girl

Date Posted: September 14th, 2017, 7:26 pm
I feel I made her shoulders too broad, she looks a bit too masculine

Not that that's a bad thing, just that I wasn't aiming for dat

Author Notes

oH LOOK I CANT DRAW HOOMANS


WHAT ELSE IS NEW?


....

This sucks

so pLEASE CRITISIZE ME

PLEASE

I NEED CRITICISM FOR HOW TO DRAW HOOMANS

Comments

Holly, I am going to be 100% honest with you.


This is really good!
Like no seriously
I mean it
Like looking at it at first glance I LITERALLY can't see ANYTHING wrong
like
like


wow

One thing is the nose is kinda flat and animal-like
BUT THAT'S NOT LIKE BECAUSE YOU'RE BAD
it's because NOSES ARE FLIPPING HARD I DON'T BLAME YOU
um
yeah
THE EYES ARE GREAT OH MY RAYFI
sorry
You wanted criticism, right?

Uhhhhhhh

To be fair I think the shoulders are perfectly fine - in fact, anatomically correct :DD
Also the clothes are great
Argh I just find way more good things than bad
uh




uhhhhhhhh

Chin should be a littttttle more to the left????


okay I give I got nothing
@WildfireK: lmao i hate noses like god

and yeah looking at it, i should move the chin

something else feels off

idk wat


thanks fren :3

(Also heyo i changed the format)
@HollyTheFluffyCat:
oh yeaaaaahhhhhh

Um also is her body supposed to be titled or standing straight on?
@WildfireK: lmao idk
@WildfireK:
Oh lol because the position of her hops portrays titling while the rest of her body portrays standing still.
It's complex and subtle and stuff, but I think that could be it
@WildfireK: oh yeah now that i look at it it does look like that

ok thanks fren :3
@HollyTheFluffyCat:
You're welcome! <3



Also


"Hops"
Lolllll XD
this is just WWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW but i find the forehead a bit weird looking
but itttttttttttttttttttttttsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
bettttttttttttttteeeeeeeeerrrrrrr ttttttthhhhhhhannnnnnnnnnn aaaaallllllllllll mmmmmmmyyyyyyyyyy ddddddrrrrrrrraaawiiings
;-;
@zero88: wHAT NO

HOW IS THIS BETTER THAN YOUR AMAZING DRAWINGS?

LIKE GOD


(I agree with the forehead part though, I realized a bit too far in the art that I made it a tad bit too large.)
@zero88: omg those are amazing fren :000
omg what a beautiful human

I cant think of critique mostly because everyone said what I was gonna say lmao

But great job!
@TheJGamer: lol thanks fren .3.
Ahhhhh you can hooman!

Only issue I see is the hair...the way you did the edges/sides doesn't look right. It makes the hair look short and spikey, when truthfully it's long and flowy :3
@ShadowStalker1128: ok fren :3
alright, who is dis fake-notreal-person *grabs a spoon*
how do i make the okay sign with typing lmao
its great
holy nice
with a little more practice your gonna be really good and im being serious girl. keep doing you !

edit: also the hair could use some softening. dont draw spikes kinda...let your pencil flow y'know? also for traditional drawing i would recommend mechanical pencils.
@zinnzinnluv: ahhh, thanks!|

And yeah, I'll pester my sis to give me her mechanical pencils :P
@HollyTheFluffyCat: buying your owns easy too a four pack works just a dollar at the dollar store

and tbh i litterly just draw a line for noses sometimes uwu'