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half positive vent - limerence

Date Posted: June 2nd, 2018, 5:33 pm

Author Notes

lmao gayy


***

Limerence

Her gleaming gray eyes,
like pools of liquid silver,
Her gentle smile
and her strong, confident voice,
it just makes me flush crimson.

For she was a flame,
burning with passionate life.
Something about her
was so magnetic, charming.
Everybody flocked to her.

And that’s why when I
see them beside another.
I don’t know why, but
There’s a knot in my stomach.
And I start to feel jealous.

Why do I feel this?
And why do I care so much?
I take a breath and
realize why it is like this.
I guess I’m in love with her.

***

recently found a new style of poetry

its like a haiku, but longer

its called a tanka and i love tankas so much theyre fun to write and easier than a haiku

Comments

@WildfireK:

<3
yeeeeeee
@Sky207: yeeEET-
The one above me is already crying for this poem.XD
@Darvin: oof XD
@HollyTheFluffyCat: Never mind,she changed her profile pic.(^v^)
But haikus are fun XD
@WiispNightmare: yeah but they’re so hard like??

I can’t shove all of my ideas into only 17 syllables XD
@HollyTheFluffyCat: oh rip
I like to think of it as a puzzle
You gotta find synonyms that fit ;3
@LightEclipse: lmao don’t worry I can’t open that well either XD